elwood
him you had better wordplay,and structure in this was good,u had acouple basic lines in there but some were good,you flow was excellent i felt....my favorite line in ur verse....

You'll never be good, And i learned something, so listen,
Ill leave you with holes... Like the Bronx education system,

final
you need to elevate man,u had okay disses but they were really simplistic man,ur flow was okay i guess,but thats it,u had really no decent lines in ur verse except for this one that is probably the best shit in your verse...

stephens rhymes are non-significant, im gonna show him his fate
congradulations, your rank is at a steady rate of zero...minus 8*

overall this goes to elwood for an allaround better verse

v/Stephen Elwood

__________________