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THEME:SITTING BY THA WATER FISHING BY THE TREE ,MY GIRLFRIEND SETTIN UP AN PIC-NIC,,,,,MY SON IS ALMOST COMING HOME FROM SCHOOL
I GOT AN RING IN MY POCKET (PROPSOIN) DEN THA CLOUDS TURNS BLACK INSTANTLY AS I LOOK UP I SEE A LIGHT COMING RIGHT AT ME~! kabooms~! strike by lighting my whole body turns to a stone phase as my girl stares she sees the horrified shock on my face the lightning keeping my foot from touching da ground like unlaw grava-ty my girl yelling and looking caresly knowing she cant help me the lighting got my voice scratch i cant even yell "lord help me" feels like my organs being evaporated,torn apart in pieces cant touch my girl all i can do is scream in pain not here,not today i'd just went fishing me and my girl gettin married next month i cant be send to my grave i feel like my eyes are in tha back of my head i cant see image like a un-connected tv plasma why iam i holding my breathe ![]() This lightning is like an venemouz snake its electric venemom spreading in my body quickly tryin to find tha death core~! i feel my heart is weaking,i feel like da lightning is a rhino from james tha giant peach hit me through da core i wish i was immortal like evvansescene but no,i cant cause i got dis lightning messing up my present (remember tha ring) death can not be no acception i pledge for eva breathin i will fight dis lightning and make my present (come true) den i felt my chest my heart was thumping my girl sitting right by me havin tears autum on her cheek (autum=fallin ) as i lay on tha grass by tha water creek sayin to my self "thank u god u saved me" hoping anotha lightning wont turn me to an stone phase (again) errrrrr idk i was just writin feeback plz ![]()
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