Yes, i liked ur vocab and multi's in it, jst that it kind of seemed like you rushed it alittle. Alot of people when they hear their songs think that its really good, which gets in the way of improving. I'm not sayin u suck, cuz u don't, ur very good, n i know that. Just that instead of makin it good vocab and stuff like that, try to make the song something that you would bob your head too

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