Voted For: Heavy Artillery

<<< BREAKDOWN >>>

Heavy Artillery:
Yo this kid steps up, not knowing who hes stepping to
this cat lost one already, I'm about to make it 2.
If you think that rappin is the way you better take a detour
I'm ready to blow up on 5, and you wont even C4.
Lol ok first bar was ok, second bar was iffy.. im not really feeling either of them.. but they are straight disses..
And where Im from the blocks be so hot your feet'll melt
and if we aiming from a distance then you'll be sure to see yourself.
This cat claims to be the best but yo the best is yet to come
this niggas "easy-baked" so come up off the mic your done.
Ok self rep on the first bar, thats a no no.. and your disses were really weak on your second bar..
He wants to spit it hard, but wait who ordered his ugly flows
when it comes to battling me you comin up shorter that mugsy bouges.
lol, ok good punch...

Ok this verse was alright, had some weak lines.. and only one punchline that was good.. you could of added wordplay, and some complexity to really get this verse going, but.. it was really plain..

RED BEAM:
lyrically abusing MC's, i thought u heard i dont stop
my name rings bells like sunday at 12 o'clock
this is a straight rhyme battle, no personals or beef
red beam rips beats like hoe ripping these streets
Wow, good flow.. BUT WAY TO MUCH SELF REP.. This is a battle, dont talk about your self... DIss your opponent..
suprised my dick aint silver, tha way im fucking these dymes
and u'd think i was a angry cokehead,tha way im "punching-these-lines"
i eat a pound of chicken, cause i love spittin greasy
and i think ur tha one hating cause u cant please me
Dude, way to much self rep.. you gotta be throwin disses on the real.. instead your talkin bout you this you that..
but im straight, like indian hair, get it right
and u'd think my dick was a floppy disk, tha way u "saving- these-bytes"
i roll right, you roll left, or somewhere outta my sight
one hit, knocking out ya lights, nigga saying good night
wow the first actual shot at your opponent.. but a little to late in the verse..


Ok your verse was on point.. but it wasnt a battle verse, you had way to much self rep.. you need to throw disses.. not gloat bout your punches or your rhymes..


<<< KONTENT >>>

Punches : RB.. too much self rep though
Wordplay: RB.. ^^
Flow: BOTH
Multies: BOTH
Disses: HA
Personals: n/a
Vokab: n/a
Fav Line: RB, coke punching lines line..
enjoyment: RB, but you should of battled not self repped.




So Heavy Gets My Vote, Because His Verse Was A Battle VErse And Did Not Have Alot Of Self Rep.. RB, throw more disses next time, and your sure to win..


REPAY THE FAVOR~~HIT MY SIG UP FOR THE BATTLE AGAINST 4FIL !!!!!

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