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12-06-04, 11:36 PM
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mess with me get cooked
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IP:
Chea
Nice-wordplay... Good Rhyming... Nice Multi'z...to Me I Wasnt Feeling Tha Struture In My Opinion.....vocab Was Good..... Either Way Good Shit Ish 8/10 Work On The Struture To Me....the Flow Kinda Fell Of When I Was Reading It.....dont Stretch Your Lines That Much.....peace....1 -ghost
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