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Old 01-22-05, 06:51 PM   #3
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beats ok a lil repetitive...delivery needs alot of work noth enough emotion..flow is choppy work on making it smoother punch lines r excellent but dont mess up ya flow homie...needs more similies better flow more word play better multis and metas too
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