Voted For: A-game

yo..this was a good battle, but wack structure made it seem kidna weak. i think a game took this one with harder punches and mettas in this one. yo structure was wayyy off...but i looked over that, and i seen that u had some hot barz in there..just work on ur structure and elevate a lil in yo punches, and u'll be a dope head...check wit NOK, drop a tryout, u got skillz
blacout.of course u took tha structure part of this and tha personals, but i dotn think ur punches hit hard enough to take that win. u gotta come harder than that...u had a good verse, but u were lackin originality. elevate on that fam..and i think ur verse was wayy too short, and u shoudlve put more effort into it..but i just wasnt feelin tha whole diss part u were tryna come wit...not good to me..
overall-this was a good battle i think. yall needa work on soem things tho, but yall got skillz

plz return tha favor on battle link in sig...too many battles gettin slept on...plz vote on tha one against country jay, tha crew battle, cause thats needs to be closed, and xplain it...

good battle, and keep elevating

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