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Old 02-22-05, 10:12 AM   #1
~Lady Fiya~
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From: chi-town
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aight this me and Cali battle, y'all seen cali's verse cuz i couldn't make it back home to post a verse so he automatically got 5-0.. but here's my verse also.. and FUCK all y'all who said i'm the worse female on this bitch.. but anywayz, leave feedback.. fa real no b/s on who y'all think won. leave a critique cuz i'm goin fa makin at least semi-finals in the next Royalty Tourney.. so Socrates leave feedback also..

CALI
Im wack? so why you went and tryed to recruit me?(link 1)
Now i gotta feel bad cuz i usually dont beat on my groupies(link 2)
Willa on vocation we needed a new slut guess who we chose?
What you thought it was skill?when ya audios like frozen rivers
...........NO FLOW!!
Yous a killa?....i agree how many horses died for ya hairstyle?
You got the same chance winning that rappers have...
....... at getting fair trails!!
You not nice you just got more dickriders then most porn sets
Made a thread you was (leaving 2 months ago..........)
....what the fuck you aint gone yet?!
You won once..........not with a single explained vote either
Think you still mad we kicked you outta A.I...
.......and you was the co-leader!!
'Lady' spits 'Fiya'?Nope! her flame is out watch as i relight her
Cuz this bitch only has one chance of winning...
....... if she hires a ghostwriter!!


~Lady Fiya~
U dragrace hygiene cuz u iron jeans in driveways, Q’s dame?
Not being profane, u got “D” fault wins 2 like ur user name…
…your parked riders in reverse to start and end on E*
He beefs wit Jury cuz Flow ONLY made you a-ttorney!
He can’t make it nowhere, so he changed his name to CALI
Pump orgasms in your arteries, give E the heart to beat me
Flattened Saucony’s, who goes to prison for stabbing “things”?!
He plays for Crème, look how early you put out the Black Queen!
I don’t mean Chess, post all over the board can’t find recess-
Shun, my crew’s for elevation, don’t think you need-less!
Stick lyrics to monorails, cuz not once you held solo tracks
So fuckin wack, S e n s e r spit too, ONLY u got bad feedback!
U won respect as an artist?! Can’t even throw a hard hit..
With a name this bitch stole from commercials for carpet!**


*his name starts and end on E.. (empire)
**carpet site--http://www.empirecarpet.com/commercials/


AIGHT NOW LEAVE FEED, i need to know what i need to work on peeps..
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