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View Poll Results: X Cell vs eyeDEA | |||
X-Cell |
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1 | 16.67% |
EyeDEA |
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5 | 83.33% |
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This was feedback posted for X-CELL
IP:
come on guys... u know u both can do better than this
STYLE: X, u got a good grip, but was lettin loose in the end; EyeDEA, i read ur rhyme at least 6 times and stiLL cant feel it man PUNCH: X delivered some, EyeDEA was here n there, cant find nEthing exceptional tho FLOW: Eye ur 4th line is really hurting, if u were going more than half way with the "-tion" rhyming, u couldve considered sticking with it the whole way and worked on havin better vocab-built multis in all ur lines; X, again u died down near the end TECHNIQUE: X, u cant accuse someone of not being able to spell, then go ahead and not pluralize 6 lineS in the blow, its like getting people's attention to realize ur mistakes; Eye u stepped up here, but correct me if im wrong, is posieness an actual word? and the break in the 4th line, cant feel that either S: X-CELL > EyeDEA (SLIGHTly) P: =tiE= F: =tiE= (1 of u couldve clinched this easily) T: EyeDEA > X-CELL (again slightly) OVERALL: i really dont know, honest truth ive read both at least 20 times and cant really feel it VOTE: i think i woulda slanted towards EyeDEA, but even if i had 20 posts at the moment to vote, i stiLL might not vote because i cant do it for either side strongly.
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