Voted For: static

tough decish....hes what i see

HNIC
>Defeat me...Mission Impossible, stop b-4 I huve u yellin "Save me"
I'm quick with the retort...so abort this mission like a baby
-pretty weak, decent thou, 5/10
>Insisted on battlin...now u gon die without a fight
Paramedics screamin shit like..."Don't go to the light"
-weak, 4/10
>A fuckin shame he's such a lame and tha Nigga's from Brooklyn
Get on tha bus, cuz I got game, like the director from Crooklyn*
-not that bad, 6/10
>See I electrify millions, while static shocks in groups of three
And the only time he's seen on screens is on the WB**
haha, nice creativity....7/10

overall: 22/40....not a bad drop, only thing i think lost you this battle was how, hard you came, your punches just seemed a little weak, didnt' really have any personals in there, so thats why you didnt get this one, i suggest working on wordplay and vocab and that will add more effectiveness to your drops

static
>He's so wack, in this battle I'll get by great
If skill was judged in size, this kid is a flyweight
-decent punch, first line coulda been better 7/10
>Nigga don't even test me, I'm really not in the mood
Nobody cares about you, you're rotting, like left-over food
-blahh, not feelin it.....4/10
>I'm the King of this bitch, man, jus you try to taunt
And you'll end up feelin' blue, like yo username font
-not bad, creative 5/10
>Cats all kno I'm sick, like you and yo mom fuckin'
You're a bitch like Paris Hilton, but the world don't see you suckin'
aha, i laughed at this, nice closer 8/10

overal: 24/40....i thought you came harder with your punches, and thats basically why you came away with my vote, you had better wordplay/vocab, and shots you took were more effective.......both had good flow/structure though

v/static

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