Voted For: Linguistics

oh dear.....

i find it a bit of an insult that i actually have to describe my vote but hear goes:

Linguistics: opener was good, nice punch, hit hard. Closer was real good! nice way to end the verse, good metaphor in a hard punch. Overall, ya flow was good, structure was tight and the punches were consistently good throughout, with some good metaphors.

Black: Opener wasnt really good, the punch wasnt making a lot of sense and didnt hit hard at all. Closer was even worse, stretched line, bad punch and wasnt hitting him at all. Overall you have a lot of elevating to do and attle some more newbies before you go at people more experienced, thats the best way to get better.

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