Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

lets make this quick...

Im bringin tears to this kid, you dont have the clearance to spit
You get no hope, cuz even if i no-showed, my spirit would win
^^DOES THIS RHYME?
I'll crucify you and your words, since you let our verbs cross
It's like i work at Olive Garden the way i left this herb tossed
^NICE META..HAHA
You raw kid... ? Stop it!.... im ahead of you, like egyptians with watches
When 'push comes to shove' your punches miss more than 'lethargic moshpits'
^AGAIN NICE WORDPLAY N META

switch it

Im 'Focus'ed like 'Ford's .. I'll batter and abuse this cat
This dude is wack, Even biters wouldnt re-use his raps
^^KINDA PLAYED...BUT DECENT
Treadmills aint keepin ya 'waist in fit' two of us and u place in fifth
Your jus a waste of spit.. replace ya lips with ya ass, cuz you tastin shit
^^THIS WAS PRETTY FUNNY
Death Vision claims he's sick ? thats the right word but the wrong idea
Your skills come up too short.. like average height in North Korea
^^HA,,LIKE THIS BAR..VERY ORIGINAL

Punchline's have ya crew hoppin and prancing in hot sand
Because my verses make LC look like a retarded pop band
^^^NOT REALLY FEELIN THIS
I wanted to get personal on this dude, but i'll still win by far
Puttin a noob against a vet, no one even knows who u are
^^THIS WAS AIIGHT I GUESS

Done-

DEATH VISION
the existance of ya whole crew is useless ya'll irrelevant
tha flow is heaven sent some say it's even intelligent
^^HMM THIS AINT REALLY A PUNCH
tha rhymes is crazy call it flung fury yall some bitches
aiyo fuck this hung jury i'll leave all of 'em in stitches
^^AGAIN...THIS AINT REALLY HITTIN
little snitches; stay in tha place of a child fuckin adolesence
sayin prayers hopin we dont murda u nigga count ya blessings
^^NO THIS IS A STATEMENT..NO PUNCH
half ya crew sounds white they bite.....fuckin net dorks
i'm sayin this shit 4 tha south nigga......FUCK NEW YORK!
^^ANOTHER STATEMENT NO PUNCH
fuck tha jury fuck tha judge nigga fuck tha district
matta fact if u don't feel me fuck whoeva's listenin
^^NO
convert these niggaz at birth like they christians
like J Gutta u only wanna battle cuz u feelin Cataclysm
^^BIT BETA
come off ya high horse mothafucka u truly aint a vet
think u harcore nigga u aint even got ya lil nuts wet
^^^I QUITE LIKE THIS..QUITE FUNNY
u niggas u tha best i'll win no contest dis a gut check
this is a easy victory like a brawl between red n ruffnecks
^^TOO BASIC
I spit flame u cant contain my punches and metas
u sweet like 16 nigga my flows turn ya body vanilla
^DNT RHYME
creating names under false pretences u far from smart
u ignorrant, inarticulate ya brains is fillin for pop tarts
^^HMMMM..NOT FEELIN IT
i'm a mastermind wit a disaster mind suicidal at best
* leaves tha crowd 2 throw drinks on u like Ron Artest*
^^OK...BETA

OVERALL
FLOW...U HAD PUNCHES IN EVERY BAR, SOME GOOD, COUPLE NOT SO..BUT U DID ENOUGH..U HAD SUM CREATIVE METAS WHICH MADE ME LAUGH.

DEATH .U PROB HAD 1 GUD BAR, MOST OF YA SHIT WAS TOO BASIC, NO REAL METAS OR WORDPLAY,TRY UPPIN YA PUNCHES INSTEAD OF MAKING SIMPLE STATEMENTS.

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