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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
03-30-05, 02:17 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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basiclly this verse sucked man.. your structure was off.. your flow was off, and you had bad vocab... and i really don't get what this verse was suppose to be about at all?? Basiclly just work on making your o.m. making sence, and no elementary rhymes...
4/10
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