this was an aiight battle...seen better from both

hotshh

If U want your name in 'Headlines' I'll provide the Tombstone
You'll "never last" son......Like EBT* cards in Group Homes
jea this shit was pretty dope...good opener....7.5/10
U only elevate in ya sig, U should practice to Rhyme Silent
Cause L.I career will never "take off"..... like Blind Pilots
[/b]second line heard before...but you played it off creative 7/10[/b]
Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!
this was the hottest line in the battle...i was feelin this 8.5/10
L.I. drop a record and break the CD to say he Murder Songs
You claim to be ILL but in but in your name its Worded Wrong
jea this was an aiight closer...decent 7/10

Hotshh
good shit hotshh your hottest bar was of course the

Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!


line. shit was bangin. your structure was good...personals was there..but none of em really hit hard. but you alwayz come with the nice wordplay and punches...overall you scored 30/40

shit was real nice


L.I


i key books with text, dissin emcess left n right, all them folks
i wrote a whole story on shh! but they still didnt column dope
[b] no..self glorification..followed by a weak punch 5/10
fatass net nerd, your just a waste of life but you still try
the only kid you size up with is sdizzle but that aint skill wise!
first line..filler..second line was nice..had me laughin 7/10
fuckin with the kid, ill put a ring around yah neck like tyson
cause shit man, your out of numbers just like the bison
blah, decent 6/10
raps cartoon man, so many fakes are soon to be made sir
cause if shh! is man of character, im the one with an eraser
yes this was hot! dope closer 9/10

L.I

your shit was pretty hot too...you fell off with a few weak lines...but your shit was pretty hot...i was feelin it......but i honestly think you could do better then this.....you scored... 27/40

v/ Hotshh!

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