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Unexpected Presence
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meh, i wrote this for VE, didn't think it was that good, just want to see what others think.....i approached the topic alot differently....so yeah, leave some feed yo
Unexpected Presence
an empty mind, deaf and blind, eroded from years of abuse hiding in shadows, dwelling in darkness, cant face the truth everlasting youth, the world itself is a harsh teacher greed, hate, power, this place is home to evil creatures gazing at the ceiling, emotionally torn, confused feelings mentally worn, lost thoughts, soul in need of healing so many choices to make, yet none seem appealing stuck in a twisted game, and the devil is dealing pain and misery are handed, constantly feeling abandoned life took off fine.............. but now it crash landed it hits hard, you lose guard, foolish thoughts of immunity fall to the temptaion of violence, due to a broken community spiraling downward, times get tough and you just get sick sick of living a life where everyone treats you like shit you just want to quit, slit ya writs, even hang yourself but you gotta admit, theres more to life than money and wealth even if you only have your health, you can still be grateful someones always looking out, even if you aint that faithful no killing, all you need be is willing, willing to believe too many deny being naive, and yet too arrogant to percieve their minds decieve, leaving their thoughts clouded and dazed they have no soul to sell because they werent religiously raised? reasoning is crazed, the fact youre breathing should be embraced think before trying to erase, why waste something you cant replace got to keep strong, its wrong thinking you need to kick the chair dont be shook, if you know how to look, there are people who care an unexpected presence, always there to help you rise above could be a spiritual essence, or the one you forever loved to pull you in, rather than shoved, always have a hand to loan life is worth living, because in it...... we're never truly alone http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186728
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