haha...nice effort dawg ^^^

Just as a note to yourself...
In times like these when you are so limited as to what you can say with only 1 bar...

You gotta throw in as much hard hitting shit as possible.

And make sure both lines have a punch and witty wordplay.
Your first line was more of a filler and your second punch didnt even hit me.

Plus dont bold your words because it gives them too much emphasis...
throwing the reader off.

No hate dawg, I aint like that. Just helpin kats out whenever I can.