Voted For: Lay-Text

LAY-TEXT- Hmmm nice, you had good imaginary, with some decent creativity. Nice flow and good vocab in your verse. You came from a different angle, your piece was so original and so though-ful. Nice shit. Nice meta'z man, added some good decent images.


Golden day'z- Alright, you need to upp your vocab it was pretty weak in your piece. The imaginary was weak also, you had it, but you could've added some meta;z man. The flow of your verse was good. Then angle you came in your piece, was more like lay-text, but didnt do it perfectly. You had emotion, well, a little bit. Overall- good verse, not great nor weak just average.


Overall=Good writing from both of you. Lay-text you had decent meta'z with your imaginary, that's the only thing that stood out in your verse, plus vocab. Golden day'z the only thing that stood out in your verse was, emotion, it was good nor great just average. You need to upp your vocab man, the imaginary in your verse was weak, that's why i'm voting for lay-text cause he came harder with imaginary, with meta'z and plus decent vocab.

No hate, pz

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