I always hate when people try to show off with needless vocabulary. I'll incorporate some "exotic" words into my poetry, but you don't want it to go over someone's head with it. It's like saying 'if you can't understand this, you're a retard' and they can't respond to the imagery without checking up on about a hundred or so dictionary definitions. Simplicity is sometimes the best way to go.

It's a good drop, though. Nice multis, though it's confusing in a lot of parts. Like I said, imagery and emotion and all that is more important then just blowing people away with vocabulary they don't understand. 8.5/10 --- No hate.