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Voted For: Mad Dog
well im gonna have to give this to mad dogg,
EC, you talked too much about how he beat you in the last few rounds, and you didnt really have hard hitting personals, and not really any good punches, and dog, work on your metaphores, i dont even think there was any...but you also need to work ont he selfglorifacation, but other than that it was decent but you had to try to hard to make your personals hit, for me, if you have to explain your personals then you shouldnt have them, and you explained alot of shit, and that tupac line was dumb becuase alot of people think hes alive *although i think he is dead*
but yea if you wouldnt have explained your personals and if you would have had hard hitting personals then you ould have beat him
MAD DOG you had some decent shit, Vocab was tight, your personals where a lil better than his, you went alot harder when you batled me, so im gonna have to say you didnt even really try..and you also had to exaplian a line, but it was real creative, and i like that...also you had some decent punches nothing amazing but it was alot better, and i was feeling your strucutre it was easy to read
vote=mad dog
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