Typing as I listen through my stock G4 speakers. I'll just coment on quality and execution.

First Verse: Vocals would have benefitted fomr recording a little further away to get that crunch out of em and some more echo in the BG to give it more ambiance to get that "dream-like state" going. The lyrics are pac-esque with a UK deliv.

Second verse: needs more annunciation and stop mumbling. has a textee-turned-audio type deliv.

Third verse: WAY nasal. sounds liek you're speaking directly thorough your nose. You need ot use some compressor on your5 vocals too so your volume is equal across the board instead of loud at times then quiet at others. Song it self was ok. Nothing that made me go "hmm..never looked at it that way" which I presume was the intent, but that's just me personally.

Hope this helped.

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