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Old 06-03-05, 04:09 PM   #35
Dizzee Rascal
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Wow at what this thread turned into
The only reason my structure could seem bad is cus i play on words like
add-a-lesson/adolecent - obviously the 1 word seems like 2 throwing the structure off but if u read it correctly the flow is their
Also i dont have generic flow that shits wack

a ................................a
a.................................a


No i experiment adding it up a bit try perhaps


a.........a..........a.............b
b...........c........c.............b

Try and play around with the multi's abit no what i mean people

Appreciate constructive critisim but being called im wack!! no way u fucking dyke my punches are far more developed than ur mind can understand


Paper cut ur eyes to show im winning by a margin

Im sorry if u neglect to see the simple metaphor of me winning by a margin and also the sides of papers having margins on thm
But im sure to ur pre-pubecent mind that just seems like mindless filler to u right?right?

fucking immortal tech could come in and say burn an orphanage to bring heat to u bastards
I imagine he would get the same fucking repsonse because ur simple mind is so fucking korrupted with retardness as u neglect to see past the genericness of ur un-developed mind
Fucking bitch
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