Nice flow, poor lyrics. It however does have some promise. Your flow is gud and if ur new 2 the game then ur lyrics r gonna b shakey. Elevation is 4 u man, keep @ it u used all the rite shit, wordplay (even if it wasnt very gud) multis but ur rhymes were basic.

Use more multis, 3-4 syllable multis if u can and less basic 1 syllable rhymes.
Try 2 develope ur wordplay and use mor intelligent puns.
Keep up the flow it pieced together nicely and flow is one of the most important factors of a rap cos if it dont flow it sounds shit.

Peace

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~Wrekless

You know the rappers these days that snap then breeze ways//
In the opposite direction of the gat that he says//
He'll cap, if you aint on in don't say you are//
before someone engraves a scar on your inflated arse//

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