Voted For: Invektive

Welll Invective..I heard ya got a deal so I decided to check ya battle out so..................


Flow-Easily Deadly Vision.....Ivective,you was rappin a lil too slow there.Maybe try rappin a lil quicker.And deadly....try to cut down on the "ugh,ught, and yeah,yeah".
Both of you had a nice delivery.No complaints there.

Lyrics-Invective......the starting(before the actual rappiing) of ur shit was just too cheesy.I'm sorry...no other way to put it.It didn't sound good and was uncreative.but luckily....you came strong at the end.Nice personals and shit.As for Deadly.....I was listening to it...and didn't find the hrd hittin punches.So work on makin ur punches hit harder.U got flow and delivery........but work on punches.

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