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Kon.Tay.Juz 5 71.43%
BaM! 2 28.57%
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Old 08-16-05, 12:15 AM   #31
PhreeNapdizzle
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Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Vote Kon..

Structure - Kon takes this.. Bam, your structure is on.. but watch what you do when you add a quote.. you need to make the quote part of the verse and it cant be off beat.

Punches - Kon... Bam, your punches are weak and off topic.. one thing u say has nothing to do with the next..
Kon get this cause even tho his punches arent much harder.. they got some personal attachments that show hes aiming at Bam..

Vocab. - neither.. i dont see good vocab from anyone.. not only in this battle.. but on this site.

Multis - Neither.. **Use multis in your verses.. make sure you keep with the topic, and put your punches in first.. but once you know you got them.. multis make your verse sound much better if you use them right**

Overall vote goes to Kon.. punches and structure were more solid..
Both of you need to work on better vocab.. multis.. and put some strength in your punches..

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