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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
08-26-05, 12:33 PM
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i liked the end, i thought the flow hurt this, well the different flows of people....too many shifting, and it was hard to follow at times, but not bad, have a good idea.....the end was cool, i think just work on wording, and maybe vocab a little too,
 ......yeah, good job though, keep uprtf on this http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206108
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