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Old 09-02-05, 11:02 PM   #16
Paranoid
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ok you have a good choice of beat i love these smooth type beats man its my style to i like how to toned your voice to it nice fit. i like your hook nice and catchy, good flow overall on the track, emotion aint to bad but it could be better, also i dont like how you layed that lil thing after you said a word you'd repeat it kinda, sometimes it sounded good but mostly it didnt, maybe dont do it all the time. but anyway this was pretty good man really lookin forward to a collaberation man

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