Voted For: Deranged

oh shit yo that vese was hella dope, lol

your first line was kinda wack but other than that first bar you did real good.....second bar was kinda forcd with the words but still good shit, i kinda liked the bar alil and i under stood what your where trying to do...3rd bar was pretty well thought out but kinda a lil too complex i didnt understand it until i the explanation and it was pretty decent...4rth bar was hella dope i like the way you used the kk to metal and meatal was spelt like he just met a L...dope shit.........

9th your verse really lagged bro...i think i got to start stepping my game up a lil bit..deranged is making me look bad...
9th your RM line was dope but everythign else was garbage....

good shit de.

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