wow @ fraud even getting a vote

the concept was played to fuck, and the delivery was weak as hell, the first line was filler and the punch itself was just too crowded, you need to shorten it and remove some of the words, cuz half of them arent even relevant

vaskez, ure punch was weak to, the concept is played out, and the personal behind it was played out to, at least ure's resembled an ok punch and had a personal (albeit a played one) with it.

V/ - Vaskez

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