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Old 11-03-05, 09:52 AM   #4
Its a me.. Mario
Bone is gay.
 
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What up DQ aint been around in awhile finaly dropin pieces again :-D

I really liked this piece DQ... Could relate to it... dunno if it was something you wrote from yourself or not but it was really good... imagery was there but it wasnt... barely felt but yet strong... i enojoyed your freeverse.. this was beautifully written... your vocab could have been uppedbut in this piece its not really needed everything works for itself... Really nice piece here babe...
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