the beat would more fit r n b cuz it had no base line so it's like ehh ya know. if it had a base line it'd be mos def good. your lyrics aint to bad actually, like that. your flow is a lil to solid slow it down so it would fit the beat better ya know. your emotion aint bad but could be upped specially for a track like this. your deilvery aint to bad either, not bad. the hook is meh the lyrics wit the hook aint fit to great and as well as your flow. but overall this was good, nice job specially for being from canada...you still on rb man?

ayyo can you rtf on my new track?
it's on the first page.

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