I like the beat. mic presence is not very good.......im not feeling the voice at all. it basically ruins the track. it makes it hard to understand the lyrics and i couldnt listen to this. lyrics are pretty basic and you dont really say anything new or original. id say up your vocab and try to come more creative. the main thing i suggest is to try a different delivery/voice.

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