im new and not that good trying to get better so im just gonna freestyle some shit so here:

to many heads think they sick stay in bed
cuz with a chop neck the only time you can get a-head
the kid is here showing some skills
ready for a kill are you serious? nah keep popin them phill's
you aint the cops, you cant make me stop
so draw'in dot's the only time you had a spot
i got the green for pot-heads and white for dust-heads
and being a fag the only time you spit at good-head
every punchline dont need to hit
but if you feel my bars then everything lagit
nah? then its a 100 shots from a singel clip
tommy gun, make me feel like am part of the mafia click

what do you think?