^^ I thought it was pretty good but i think u should drop an open mic to get more critiqued

i dispose of my foes and move 'em like some chess pieces
and i stalk u like crows makin u lay down and rest in peace
welcome to the deceased where im killin all the priests
comin for u next betta start prayin before the guns release
sprayin bullets the size of fruits this is my life with mics
filetin people like fish stabbin them with some spikes
ignite the fire for my desire burnin all the liars and fiends
such a horrifying scene kinda like a nightmarish dream
get the key and pop the trunk get out and rock the pump
box out the chumps finish them off and the bodies i dump