typing as I listen....ok flow is koo..but ya pronounication is lacking...ya cadence is reason I see u really gasping for air an cutting off the ending of words to get a breathe..beat is nasty..good choice....an this singer dude is ill..ya delivery was nice an laid back...u ahd the general idea of how to use ya voice on this jus need to do it in a more polished manner....once again ya breathe control hurt u....it prevented u from really animated ya voice....or changed ya flow up significantly....but u def elevating playa..def a good listen..keep it up man

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