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Old 12-31-05, 12:12 AM   #4
Mentalz
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It's hella fading away... RV is fading away, and the OM mods do nothing to revive it

Anyways, dope collab. Atty you had the poetic vibe which is becoming more and more evident now adays, but it fits well. I liked your concept, nice play on the topic.

"As I sit upon it, my thoughts come tracing the facts ,
Of how we loved our children but our children never loved us back"
^ Dope opener & Favorite lines. flowed perfectly and set the scene just right. Never heard of you, but you're pretty good. Vocab was all in the right places.

Nice imagrey, both of you.

Keep it up atty.

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