woah this is pretty tight, first verse structure is reAlly short lol, like 5 words lines, first time seeing it, its like a hole hook verse u know, pretty dope tho, had fun readin it, second verse "Of how we loved our children but our children never loved us back" that was seriously dope man, i was feelin that line, true spittin, nice vocab too, structure is so so, overall this is a good collab, second dudes verse reminds me of my style of OM, we should collab, peace