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01-06-06, 08:57 PM | #1 | ||
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Cut The Cutlery
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alright, this is a piece i wrote for my girl, thought i might as well get some feed on it, try not to be dicks, aight? oh, and i wrote this in an hour, yesterday, so boo hoo if structure or anything sucks
__________________________________ the world's always changing, but i still stand true because nothing could happen, that'd change my love for you time indicates your beauty, and with it, it only grows but yet as time passes, you'll still seem a blossoming rose for in the garden of my soul, where only darkness is known you shine so brightly, it cracks right through the stone a lone flower emerges, its deep crimson petals offsets any doubts of life, keeping fate on the level yeah, that was deep, but do you know how that happens? i mass my love for you with passion, and flash it to action into a fashionable attraction, surpassin' any faction creatin enough traction, so love passes everlastin' mathematical satisfactoin, i'm matchin your reactions theres so many parts of you to like, i'll enjoy solving fractions but rationally its different, if you really think it through should you be alive, seeing how you're too good to be true? it doesn't seem right, but hold on, i'll tell you what does when we hold each other tight, and our lips come to touch re-arrage the alphabet? sure, i'd put 'i' and 'u' together but i'd also stick in 4 others, just to make it a little better and then it'd be perfect, that combination sounds the best but still my favourite beats are putting an ear to your chest nessle my head beneath your chin, i could lie there for weeks the only time i'd move, i'd land a kiss on your cheek i have sentances to tell you, that i can't put into words...i just want to be around you, heh, i'm jealous of your shirt a lifetime seems forever, doesn't seem like i'll last, however it'd be alot better for me, if we could spend it together you and me for eternity, even beyond the face of earth 'you and me'..(pause)...those three words probly the best in the verse it hurts to be away, but i'll tell you what gets me through each day that passes, marks one day closer to see you i'm glad we're apart.......trust me, we're not at a loss cause i'd hate to imagine my life if our paths never crossed we all seek inner peace, you ask me? i've found mine cause i've never felt so free when i stare in those brown eyes with that bright smile of yours, every night becomes noon and so warm hearted, even december feels like june and when everything's outta sync, and can't stand the noise it all seems so fitting, when it blends with your voice its more than music to my ears, its a symphony and choir your pitch is like angels, lifting spirits from the fire you ask about our future? well i'd tell you if i knew how bout i meet you at the fork in the road, a basket full of food? we can decide together, your arms around my shoulders my hands down on your hips...cliff hanging with boulders see, as long as im with you, theres no where else to be i know this is in my chest, how? cause you're what turns the key ___________________________________________ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211851 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218972
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