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Dopium |
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Voted For: Dopium
Reign won this battle, Nice attempt Allik but I wasn't really feeling your verse..... Reign ~ The structure was alright didnt really affect the flow,.. I felt that some of your lines was pretty predictable. And this bit u can tell was just a filler and rushed... \/\/\/\/\/\/\/\/ Knocking on her door patiently waiting for a answer. She opened up to find out shes a belly dancer. It don't really add up but thats the only fault I can moan about !! sorry thats why I'm a Critic... Vocab didn't really have any, flowed well, but uping complexity. Other then that it was a pretty good drop. Allik ~ I liked the concept, the whole good side bad side, but other then that the whole thing was pretty basic. It flowed well, but no emotion, vocab !!! it was alright..... Vote Reign had a solid verse, and was a good read Stay up both 1~ |
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