hmmmmm this wasn't really hot... it looks like you just started rapping... you'r on the right track... but try to update your refferances... for instance my style has been called a "pop-culture refferance style" I generally frequently reffer back to things that have happened in pop culture... but it does matter where your refferances are from... they do help for metaphores if used well which can make for some nice one liners... there aren't too many stand alone lines in your verse... and for a bragging post like this you really should have a lot or an ill ass interlocking flow... (which you didn't) ... but keep trying

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