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Old 06-13-06, 04:08 PM   #30
Ca'lam
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aight. i see a lot of bullshit in this thread. i aint gon name no names. but since i aint been here and i have absolutely no history with either one of you lmao, ima give ya'll some honest feedback.


i heard both cuts - fatality and now this one.

ima do Q first cause i just got done listening to his.

Q: aight intro could have been cut out untill the verse. flow was kinda choppy. you was riding the snares and shit, but i wasent really feeling the flow a whole lot. not bad, but wasent up to Q par. Lyrics was aiiight. i hear alooot of filler in their. in my opinion if i was gonna have filler id try to make it like generic punches. cause then atleast youd have some punches in their. best line i have to agree that it was the man affection. beat choice was good. i dont really rate or feed on quality, cause as long as you spittin thas all that matters to me.

but overall, it wasent a bad diss. the style was more like a song than a diss. it sounded rushed, wasent up to what i normally expect for you. still on the upper scale as far as RV goes, but thats not saying a whole lot.


apexx: aight. came right in. had a nice battle style. flow wasnt perfect, but it sounded like a battle flow. you should have stopped after the first two beat switches. last two killed ya diss. but first two was on point. even ya filler was decent. clear voice. i could understand everything you said. clear. last 1-2 minutes was kinda wack tho. pistons line = no no. so played. but i mean, Do You. not much to complain about untill 2-3 minute mark. to me there were quite a few quotables.


over all i enjoyed apexx more. more of a battle track than Q's. both had decent tracks.

p.s: i was a little more critical on my feedback because battle tracks are objective, while song feedback is more "take it for what it is" type tracks. Hope this isnt mistook by either.

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