Aight listenin..damn what beat is this?...intro is good..im feelin the singing..whoever it is..ooh ure quality is nasty lol...but i cant hit that nigga so ima continue...your flow is decent and multis are straght and the lyrics good..BUT the shit u gotta work on is the emotion, summ shit jus seem u readin nah mean...and not rlly feelin the words all the time...and hook is real nice, i like you put a spin off the oringal hook from sum1 else on a diff beat...if you had the quality this song wud be 10 times better..emotion is better on 2nd verse..but thats it:

emotion and presence thats all u gotta work on

delivery, flow, lyrics are all nice

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