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02-21-03, 07:26 PM
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"Search For Perfection"
IP:
Here's a new topic for y'all to ponder about...
he's feeling weak at the cost of tryin to get a meaning across but everytime he puts his pen to a pad, it seems that he's lost and its like its absurd, cuz although he's devoted his time he cant get his emotions to rhyme, or describe it in words he spends hours upon hours putting words in a section just to throw them away because of his search for perfection he knows the effects, yet he wants to be known as the best so he takes criticism to heart, like theres a hole in his chest cuz he's concerned of what everyone else is bound to think so he thinks about these things and writes til he's out of ink... then throws the paper away... and goes to get another pen and then once again he thinks of ways of makin it great never takin a break from writin; then he's scrappin another its like his train of thought doesnt even have a conductor.. or his thinkin cap just doesnt fit, and he's had enough of it... but he keeps on writing, because the man just loves to spit alas papers are still bein torn and ripped from his folder he's a starvin artisist eatin away at the chip on his shoulder the kids a serious writer who wont choose to stop til later he's belemic trying to throw up his food for thought on paper attempts fail over and over again to say what he wants to say its not the same on some other days when shit flows from the pen he stays copin but then... its over, but the kid is in sorrow. cuz he needed some sleep, so he'll have to finish tomorrow. Feedback is appreciated... P.E.A.C.E. |
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