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you remind me to much of a female version of 50 on this. Your flow works and shit on the beat. The hook is catchy fa sho, it needs a better effect though. Your 2nd verse was my favorite, lyrics was hottest on it. Flow picked up a bit, and ya delivered it hotter. overall I thought the track was decent, you need more emotion though just try work on that. ut yea nice job Yvonne.
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...993#post3096993
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