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Old 11-15-06, 05:37 PM   #25
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hahaha intro was raw as fuck, lmao ..... nice beat... Made you look... kinda feelin the "KING MEEEE"

Verse 1: this flow is aight, but i just dont like ur delivery on this shit...... some of the lines are decent, but u have some played ones.... we can tell ur hype about this shit, ok first verse

hook: im really likin this shit..... nice way to flip it "wheres my crown at" was nice

Verse 2: WAY more lyricall..... GOD DAMN... some of these lines are raw, but i still dont like ur delivery... but these two lines were raw...

Yo I hate to break Jaws.... but your name, J. Summers
Is sooo last season, that I'm makin' J. Fall

Kid, you ain't fire. Rap hasn't look forward
To J. Summers, since fuckin' Jigga retired

heavy disses and nice wordplay..... i also like the outro... clever

good shit overall...... well mixed and everythin
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