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Old 11-25-06, 08:58 AM   #16
Spektikul
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ROGER GLOCKS
you get no respect. wanna bet? tell ppl bout yourself in text
cuz a don-key travels along way but im talking bout the dude with Shrek
lol, this was kinda cheesy and seemed like forced use of multis but it was okay punch-wise i suppose

THA DON OF MICS
I spit-raw, keep it clean brah, cuz im coming with 'R' rating's to tear this 'G' apart
Flip it hard, bloody and scared, my rhymes leaving ya in a confision like a "Jig-saw"
stretched line, didnt rhyme, played concept
Wanna come with movie lines? "kid" your whack n "play"ed
N dont worry about dropping on time..cuz ya can suck dick good enough
...just wait until Monday
WACK PUNCH! plus super stretched, whats up dude?

ROGER GLOCKS
listen I dont need extra time! cuz what u said. i'll drop nothin

^^ this invisible line juss killed his verse n I was sorta rushing
lol, i like this concept, never seen anyone do an invisible line before, lol, didnt even need to drop your second bar for the win.

Don, think up some better punches next week, take your time, and word them so they arent so stretched yo. good job on your first bar Glocks, and your second one was only dope cause i never seen that shit before, word.

V/GLocks.......................
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