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Old 11-19-06, 08:18 PM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
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Group B: Daubs (3-1) vs. Spektikul (3-1)

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Its week 5 of this 7 week season. It's time to distance urself from the competition. There were some cool punches last week, but some of you still need to step it up! Drop nice or risk not making the playoffs.

Battler #1: Daubs
Battler #2: Spektikul

Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Wednesday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #2 drops 2 bars due Thursday night (11:59 pm ET)
Battler #1 drops 1 bar due Friday night (11:59 pm ET)

4 Links in check-in due Sunday afternoon (6:30 pm ET)

Here are a few rules that you SHOULD know already but if not, now you do:
- Feeding is allowed AND encouraged!
- If you sway, you WILL be DQ'ed. There are no second chances.
- Voting rules are enforced. If you dont leave links you'll lose. And remember, all votes must be broken down bar by bar.
- If you havent read the rules yet, do it now.

Good Luck.
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Old 11-19-06, 09:29 PM   #2
Spektikul
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Last edited by Spektikul : 11-25-06 at 09:04 AM.
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Old 11-22-06, 07:08 PM   #3
Daubs
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safe bruv.

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Old 11-23-06, 12:35 PM   #4
Spektikul
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^ Yo, my boy didnt drop, whats goin on here??

...ill just wait for him, but hes already too late, dang!
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Old 11-23-06, 01:35 PM   #5
Daubs
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rahhh
forgot.

il drop in 20 mins
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Old 11-23-06, 02:07 PM   #6
Daubs
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your a fag so, dont even TRY and rap bro
or il put an end to tik, like nike went n' lost ther cashflow
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Old 11-24-06, 01:36 AM   #7
Spektikul
The Original Half Ass King
 
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The glass half empty or half full? Shit, Daubs dont give a fuck..
Both him in this league and his soccer team, aint ever seen a cup..
Throw punches at your hair, cause extentions is all i see from you..
If I were as ugly as Daubs playin in my sandbox........
.............................................my cat would prolly bury me too..

Goodluck. Word.
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Old 11-24-06, 08:28 PM   #8
Daubs
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when i rip this dike i spit it tight, why? this kid int hype
so fuck your set, blood or not ima be killin him with cryptonite

Gl bro
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Old 11-24-06, 09:05 PM   #9
King Solo
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DAUBS
your a fag so, dont even TRY and rap bro
or il put an end to tik, like nike went n' lost ther cashflow
this was a pretty simple punch, the concept wasn't entirely original and the whole nameplay shit on spek is pretty outdated now.. honestly, i thought it could be better, and the played factor let you down.

SPEKTIKUL
The glass half empty or half full? Shit, Daubs dont give a fuck..
Both him in this league and his soccer team, aint ever seen a cup..
Throw punches at your hair, cause extentions is all i see from you..
If I were as ugly as Daubs playin in my sandbox........
.............................................my cat would prolly bury me too..
dissing oldham athletic is always fun in my book, they suck!! HA!! but really the punch was weak and had no hitting power. it was just a simple bar that basically said he aint won this league, and his team aint won a trophy. the second bar was ok, the concept could've been used a lot better though.

DAUBS
when i rip this dike i spit it tight, why? this kid int hype
so fuck your set, blood or not ima be killin him with cryptonite
the bloods and crips concept is pretty played also now, but you executed it well enough with some nice wordplay. still though, the whole cryptonite wordplay does seem pointless because it doesnt go with any of the punch.. its just there as meaningless wordplay. maybe if you would've incorporated some superman shit into the punch also it would've been raw.


Honestly, I got this as a pretty even battle. Its like neither one of them bothered to try, but Spek is the king of doing that. On the one hand I've got daubs who had two played concepts for his bars.. and the cryptonite wordplay was pretty meaningless. And then, on the other hand I've got spek who had a played concept in one bar and dropped it simplistic.. and then an ok concept that was worded poorly. Well, in my book the quality of the punches were about the same to me... and daubs had 2 played concepts and spek only had 1.. so i'm gonna VOTE SPEKTIKUL
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Old 11-25-06, 08:51 AM   #10
Roger Glocks
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daubs

your a fag so, dont even TRY and rap bro
or il put an end to tik, like nike went n' lost ther cashflow

^^err not feeling this man

when i rip this dike i spit it tight, why? this kid int hype
so fuck your set, blood or not ima be killin him with cryptonite

^^ya not feeling the wording of this and crypt and blood shit is played

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The glass half empty or half full? Shit, Daubs dont give a fuck..
Both him in this league and his soccer team, aint ever seen a cup.

^^simple as hell but a cool personal

Throw punches at your hair, cause extentions is all i see from you..
If I were as ugly as Daubs playin in my sandbox........
.............................................my cat would prolly bury me too..

^^aight another simple punch..aighttho

dissapointed battle here...4 average punches but i like the first line by spek better then anyone of daubs...

vote-spektikul
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Old 11-25-06, 10:22 PM   #11
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your a fag so, dont even TRY and rap bro
or il put an end to tik, like nike went n' lost ther cashflow
^ i haven't seen this used on him. not bad.
when i rip this dike i spit it tight, why? this kid int hype
so fuck your set, blood or not ima be killin him with cryptonite
^ ehh, nah. this could've been set up a lot better but it's played anyway. you might've been able to take this battle with a good feed.

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The glass half empty or half full? Shit, Daubs dont give a fuck..
Both him in this league and his soccer team, aint ever seen a cup..
^ decent. set up well, you did all you could with the concept.
Throw punches at your hair, cause extentions is all i see from you..
If I were as ugly as Daubs playin in my sandbox........
.............................................my cat would prolly bury me too..
^ you could've used this one better.


i'm edging this to spektikul because i felt daubs second punch was played. still a pretty close battle though, keep it up dudes.

v/ Spektikul.
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Old 11-26-06, 12:44 PM   #12
N.Tavarez
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when i rip this dike i spit it tight, why? this kid int hype
so fuck your set, blood or not ima be killin him with cryptonite
THIS WAS OK BUT NOT REALLY HARSH OR PERSONAL


your a fag so, dont even TRY and rap bro
or il put an end to tik, like nike went n' lost ther cashflow
DIDNT REALLY GET AT 1ST ITS COOL

VS
The glass half empty or half full? Shit, Daubs dont give a fuck..
Both him in this league and his soccer team, aint ever seen a cup..
DECENT, NEEDED BETTER WORDING TO SET UP THE PUNCH
Throw punches at your hair, cause extentions is all i see from you..
If I were as ugly as Daubs playin in my sandbox........
.............................................my cat would prolly bury me too..
GOOD BAR HERE BUT COULDVE BEEN GREAT

GOOD BATTLE I GOT SPEK EDGING OUT DAUBS FOR THE WIN
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Old 11-26-06, 10:45 PM   #13
Spektikul
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good battle daubby, we'll meet again yo. lol.
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Old 11-27-06, 03:35 AM   #14
Diet Coke
 
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Daubs
your a fag so, dont even TRY and rap bro
or il put an end to tik, like nike went n' lost ther cashflow
Eh.. mixed feelings on this one..
when i rip this dike i spit it tight, why? this kid int hype
so fuck your set, blood or not ima be killin him with cryptonite
The wordplay was cool, but blood/crip shit is played.. /the cryptonite didn't really go with anything else in the punch..

Spek
The glass half empty or half full? Shit, Daubs dont give a fuck..
Both him in this league and his soccer team, aint ever seen a cup..
Not bad, didn't hit too hard..
Throw punches at your hair, cause extentions is all i see from you..
If I were as ugly as Daubs playin in my sandbox........
.............................................my cat would prolly bury me too..
Could have been worded a bit better..

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Old 11-27-06, 11:56 AM   #15
M&rk
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your a fag so, dont even TRY and rap bro
or il put an end to tik, like nike went n' lost ther cashflow
^^didn't like
when i rip this dike i spit it tight, why? this kid int hype
so fuck your set, blood or not ima be killin him with cryptonite
^^pretty funny, coulda been worded better
vs.................

The glass half empty or half full? Shit, Daubs dont give a fuck..
Both him in this league and his soccer team, aint ever seen a cup..
^^^decent
Throw punches at your hair, cause extentions is all i see from you..
If I were as ugly as Daubs playin in my sandbox........
.............................................my cat would prolly bury me too..
^^^didn't like

vote- duabs for that crip line
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