some solid lines in there that got lost in the over-all piece, kinda like some of it was rushed...... you needa stay consistent wit tha whole structure and maybe extend the length of some of your vocab.... the skillz are there they just needed to be used with a little more thought process to polish off tha piece into something more than average... 6.5/10

my fav lines:

rapverse? whos the dopest in text focused to wreck rappers
soaked in sucess, and open to threats like upset actors?