Voted For: Ransum

this aint much effort but why try agenist a slouch
cuz for that title shot i'll trash this dude like oscar the grouch...
^^^ pretty simple, and what title shot? u need better set ups and its always better to word your bars so u dont have to use the word "like".. but this was still your best line
open ya mouth... all we see is rotten teeth AN He think he spits dirty....
its funny, cuz for votes he'll peak on wood like a birdy (woodywood peaker)
^^how can a person peck on wood, not really a diss, bad wording
I'm an ass hole, a dirty fighter, call me a cheater
take a stand.... but they dont think your a "happy boss" when they say "cheer-leader" *HA He look like a Fag*
^^^ attempt at wordplay, but very lame, and u usually wanna put the word u playin wit near the beginning of the second line
i got no fear either of hes simple punches like im hotter then hell
cuz he'll act like he got seafood allerge's.... when slouch start dodge'in these shellz
^^^agian with the like, but good format for the punch, just shell wordplay is pretty played
im honest as-well, you battleing aint noting to see like "a-cup bra" flashes
punches? you use to geting your 'Ass-Kick' so its noting to catch a slouch with a 'HOOK' like "Fishing-Tactics"
^^the first line woulda been a better punch, and u dont wanna have two punches in one bar. u wanna set one up to make it hit harder.
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anyway
vs.
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You got a clout of pervs, you kidnap to have fun,
They put the money issues aside...
And hold lil white boys for Ransum.
^^best bar of the battle, perfect format with the set up and wordplay at the beginning of second line
I smash bums, just like this retard,
He posted twice in the 1-2 leauge...
'Sum obviously cant 'add' bars.
^^
real lame cuz in that league your u have to post twice
Im just pushin a drop, still my flows are great
and fuck rock, paper, scissors...
I got a 'straight hand' ta smack ya poker face.
^^^bad wording u shoulda put the straight hand part where the rock paper scissors part was and word it for a better punch
See Ill still go the distance, I'll impale this prick
and bitch you're a flyweight
So its easy to see why your drops are shit
^^^
and this was just shit and had no wordplay or real hard hitting anything

vote- ransom for attempting more wordplay and havin an overall better and well thought out verse.

return the favor on my battle... link in my sig, its here in front lines aswell, youl'll see it

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