ok not bad.. but not great either... those punches need to be more specific.. more played to ur oppenent.. those lines can be used in ANY battle.. to do some real damage.. get some beef and info on ur oppenent... like look up some of his/hers old rhymes and lyrics and pull shit out of there... that could always work.. need to up ur word play too.. some of those lines are a little played.. and that crap about mars was lame... fix that lol.. rest was good i guess..keep it comin fams