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atlas the vagabond
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Maku JaiiLiin vs. China Doll 2nd round(The crow story:)
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well i recently downloaded a beat, Jay Z-meet the parents instrumental, and it made me come up with a whole story. sit back and enjoy. listen to it while you read this, if you can get tha beat.
rules: 6 line minimum, unlimited max. first to 5 votes. the 3-0 rule is in effect. no crew votes, dickrydin, hatin and etc. Can you see the scars on my flesh/ the blood forced from my veins/ Near-fatally wounded, prayin for the end of this pain/ My spirit floats in preparation for my ascension to Christ/ But the mind of a survivor keeps me attached to this life/ Because of my many enemies, my head comes wit a price/ Someone almost cashed in on it recent, in a lyrical fight/ Locked in battle, I battled her, mistook her for trife/ She looked to be nice, till she revealed a blade in her lines/ Stabbed me slashed at me, the attack admittedly had me/ In a state of near death, till I waited for death gladly/ But the pain of loss was used to my advantage/ And granted me another life, left on this earth still standing/ Now I stand reanimated, walking a breathing corpse/ The crow soaring above me, keeping my eyes on this doll/ The grave awaits the weak, like bed sheets to the tired, for that I never sleep/ Prepared my death bed in the throne, where my head will rest in peace/ I entered into her room, crept up the crow on my shoulder/ Began to unfastened my weapon of choice from it’s holster/ Post up by the head of her bed, caressed her head and her neck/ She sleepin so peacefully, unknowing in short moments she’s dead/ Clamped one hand on her mouth, silenced her screams/ Ripped her clothes off of her body, while takin the belt off from my jeans/ Saw the tears rolls from her pupils, watched her plead with her eyes/ I could hear the pain in her voice, when I penetrated her thighs/ Remorseless, I violated and raped her/ Saw her wishing that the fate of non existence would take her/ So many things flashed in my mind, while I muffled her speech/ Now rippin vaginal tissue, her midsection begins to bleed/ Not givin a fuck about wut monster she believes me to be/ She struggled beneath me so I beat her repeatedly with the handle part of the heat/ Felt her breath on my neck, her legs clamped around my back/ Salty tears dirty my shirt, she pleads for me to get back/ I finished, jumped off her quick/ reacted simple as this/ “Remorse is only for the weak, for you I’m saving a clip.” Yanked her to her feet, brought knuckles down on her skin/ Broke her jaw with pistol whip, and continued till she wus bloody and ripped/ She stood fists clenched barely able to stand/ As I stood in front of her, smile on my face, pistol placed in my hand/ Wasted her in eight shots, smoke escaping my gun/ I walked next to her body, bloodied knocked over and hunched/ Knelt beside her, etched the crows name in her chest/ Pressed my lips to hers, simulating the kiss of death/ Last edited by Maku JaiiLiin : 03-17-03 at 08:29 PM. |
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